Posted by Andrew on November 16, 2003 at 01:23:30:
In Reply to: I need help writing rap lyrics!! posted by Jackie on June 07, 2002 at 19:10:39:
i jus wanna no if my rap is good
Im so bored im writin dis rap wit paper and pen/ people say i cant make a song until the end/Why? is it cuz im really white?/ or is it just cuz i cant really fight/ wait, i could beat up kids half my size/ but anything above i dont even try/ its tha same wit basketball, they say im way too short/ but just wait until i run u up and down the court/ hell ya i could play every single sport.
i dont no if its good or not pleze write back with some help